5/22/08

Final Touch

It was a night, full of dreams
flowers all over the room
bringing fragrance
to rekindle their desires.


As flowers floating on waters
and drifting to ocean
their eyes stuck in mellow
like an ice which never melts.


He binds close to her
to feel the soft touch
down the neck and cheeks
teasing her lips and grapes.


Its not the time, but the length
all pure and delightful gifts
of treasures, pleading to own
in ones hand.


Kisses and roses shared
for the first time
holds the edge of deepness
in mind.


A simple and sparkle touch
makes them understand
a fish out of water
is all about the final touch.


It has no name
when its quiet and secret
longing for a new life
to be born in Love again.

10 comments:

vishesh said...

:)

Jeya said...

to be born in love again."

ah, how i love your endings. :-)

First night.. and the final touch.. classic.

Alok said...

lovely yet again .. as Jeya pointed out loved the ending ... love the images that u fill ur poems with


Alok

priya said...

V :) When ru packing for shooting your favorite hills.

priya said...

I am laughing Jeya. Thank you!!!!

priya said...

Thank you so much Alok.

Casperbaba said...

again... i am not good with this "love" wala feeling.... so wudn't try and say much... :)

but this piece of urs was truely soft... dragged me back into my past of companionship!

god bless! keep writing :)

priya said...

Thank you Casper. Hmm thaz nice to go back to memories once in a while.

*~*Sameera*~* said...

I loved the rich usage of words.The passion can just be felt!

priya said...

Sameera,

U just surprised me today:) I see that passion in your page too. Keep going..